2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of science,computer is familiar to us step by step.Is that good or bad for us? In my opinion,first of all,the invention of computer makes great profit for us in many walks of life,which we can't ignore.In addition,to ordinary people,we are able to know the world as soon as possible every day on the Internet and enjoy life through surfing the Internet. However,as we know,every coin has two sides.It is obvious that computer has its disadvantage.We cannot ignore that many students,even some of the adults are addicted to the computer games,which is bad for their health. In all,the invention of computer marked the process human acquired,and in return,good for us.