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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5576
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用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
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可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能较灵活的使用词汇,可是单词拼写还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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my home is not very big .i hope in the future i will buy a further larger house. there are 3 bedrooms ,one kitchen ,one study ,two sittingb room.i reallty enjoy being in each room of my house since wach has its pown wnique characterics and function.if i had to choose,i would say the living room.the biggest feather of the living room is the window.you know it is really relaxing to look at the folf lawn that seems to be endless. it is about 130 square meters.when u enter the room,whe u enrer the room,youe frist glace will be at the vesibule ,after passing through it,u will see the livving room with a huge french window .just the opposite the window,on the other siide of the livving room,is our dining table with 4 chairs.in addotion,we have two bedrrom,s and astudy room to the south of the dinning rooom

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