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my father is a science teacher.he is very strong. he has a big mouth ,two big ears ,two bi eyes and not to small nose .he often wears a black new shirt and blown opants with two big shoes. he is very kind and he is very smart,isn,t he . he give lesson almost everyday.his students were very happy to listening happily to his lecture,because is very funny.who is he ,he is my father