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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
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the quality of life has become one of the pressing pressure for mankind nowadays .foe one thing,we frequently suffer from tghe extreme weather auch as hurricanes,drought in some parts of the world duo to more rainfaill and more intense windy.also , the world is getting warmer and warmer , which leads to the rise of the sea level . what has caused such changes.frist .excessive greenhouse gases block the heart change bewen the earth and the atmosphere..resulting in the warm of the earth.at the same time ,the increasing world population result in working pressure and p don,t pay less attention to their health. to solve the problems, global cooperation is the best way forward.the g should strengthen information exchanges ,develop environmental management technologues,and formulate international co2 emmission standards.we individuals can also make a difference by leading a low carbon lifestyle.only through making joint efforts can human beings win the battle to sole the problem.we should have health awareness and sports fittings and learn howw to be easier on myself
