题目要求:
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解:
题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。
能较准确地使用学术词汇,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;能够使用一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
in recent years ,some ad manipulate p ,s buying behavour and then creat fashion in order let p to buy them .it is benefit the advretiser to self your product,while s p think if the bad product do the large and harming the rights and interests of consumers .it contribue to p have different responses to the issues. s p advocate that ad have good influence on the mankind.they mantain that p are better off to purchase the product which is advertising thankes to the economic boom three decades. the argue that ad can provide more message about the products even p don,t learn about it.it benefit all the families .while other pepole are opposed to buying the prouuct from the ad.they think p make use of channels to get the knoledge from tv and some products which can be see from tv is different from the real product,they may felt cheated by the all kinds of ad.merchants in order to earn money by hook or crook to deceoive the conumers. in my opinion, it is ridiculous to buy the frak seem to beauty on the screen .it is common in many countries that ad is often accompanied with some false message .these issues can be resolved by some active and positive actions. i personally think that ad have advantages as welll as disadvantages