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2011年8月25日雅思写作真题:谁应投资于高等教育

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:10浏览次数:866
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题目要求:

Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:

1. All costs are paid by the government.

2. All costs are paid by the student.

3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?

题目讲解:

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1. the higher education = college education 高等教育

2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款

3. work one’s way through college 半工半读

4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金

5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险

6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力

7. come from the remote rural areas

8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助

9. economic support 经济支持

10. finish college education 完成高等教育

11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题

12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力

13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会

14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险

15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作

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traditional ,higher education can be funded in many diferent ways,that is to say all costs are paid by the goverment,however,in recent years , there has appeared a viewpoint that all costs are paid by the students or using loans from the g .this essay will discuesss the issue from both sides

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