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There are four seasons in a year in our city. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. In spring, it is warm. In summer, the weather is sunny and hot. In fall, it is cool and windy. Winter is cold and snowy. I like winter best. It’s my favorite season. Why? Because I like to make a snowman with my friends.