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中考考前作文集中训练附范文13:Do Chores

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:51浏览次数:1009
要求:

以“Do Chores”为题,写一下你在家里做哪些家务,不做哪些家务,并说明理由。

可参照下列短语:

wash the dishes,do the laundry,clean the room,sweep the floor,fold the clothes,make the bed,take out the trash,wash the car…


用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

i would say i often do the houisework in my home .actually , i do it almostv everyday. it is our duty to help our parents to do it. i would wash the dishes after dinner. when clothes are dirty i would do the landry.in addition , i would clean the room frequently to make my room clean and comfortable to live .when the land is too dirty , i would sweep the floor .i also enjoy fold the clothes and make the bed. when i can see much junk ,i will take out the trash.my father bought a new big brand car so i was delight to assist him wash the car.more importantlt ,there are many p in my home ,so i believe that i should do sth to constructive of a harmonious society

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