2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(15)写作:介绍自己

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Let me introduce myself. I have a big family. My name is An Yang. My birthday is May 21st. My telephone number is 85340261. There are eight people in my family. They are my grandparents, parents, aunt, uncle, my cousin and me. I like sports. I like volleyball and tennis. I play tennis very well. I have six tennis bats and three volleyballs. I eat healthy food. Hamburgers and bananas are my favorite. My favorite subjects are Chinese and math.