2000年1月英语四级作文真题:解决上大学的费用

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Now,more and more college students finance their college education by themselves.Maybe you think of how they finance their college education.In fact,college students have lots of means to earn money through their space time.For example,they can do tutor on the weekend,and they can help others write books,do hourly work in restaurant or stores and so on. For me,I can work in summer,but I only do some jobs of the simple and unknowledge.So I think it important for me to study hard and learn some technology in college,then I can get in a company to work to finance my college education