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题目要求：
Arts (painting and music) does not directly improve people's life, so government should spend money on other important areas. Do you agree or disagree?
写作思路：
第一段：引入话题，艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段：社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平，如教育，医疗，环境或基础建设。但是这些并不会增加人民的幸福感受
第三段：人民需要艺术，因为：艺术相关人们的情感和价值观，这是人们行为的核心部分；艺术培养人的创造和创新能力；艺术是娱乐休闲方式，艺术是感情和精力释放的安全方式，艺术促进不同文化和民族间的理解
第四段：政府应该既投资社会基础服务，也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会
词汇拓展：
underestimate 低估
emphasize 强调
boom = prosper繁荣
Tackle 解决
quantify 量化
empower 使人增强力量
intangible 抽象的
not necessarily 不一定
solely = only 仅仅
inspire 激励
excel 出众
make the best of 充分利用
robust 有力量的
enhance 增强
channel 引导
学术词汇表达灵活，但要注意词汇拼写的检查；能够使用一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
the function of arts is to colllecct and exhibit a large variety of items for educational and eentertainment purpose .arts is an important partof people,s culture life,children,s education and tourist sightseeing.however, it can,t improve p ,s life directly.so there has been a hearted debate as to whether g spend money on it. on theone hand ,social service can improve p ,s life directly.with the development of the science and technology,it can provide more thoughtful service,it is benefit for educational ,medical service ,infrastructure,but it can,t increase the happiness feelingof the people. ob the other hand , there seem to be also advantage abpout arts for people.as the arts plays an essential part in the education of people, particular children and yongbpeople, it can every means to attract the public ,it realted to the people,s emotions and values,this is the core part of humanbehavior,it can cultive people,s art creation and innovation.besides,it may promote p understand culture between different cultures and nationas. taking both sides into the connsideration,i believe that as long as g invesment arts and social service .only in this way, can those our life be properly operated and creat a healthy society
