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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1182
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
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文章较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,有较多拼写错误请认真检查;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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recent decades have witnessed an apperant tedencty that more and more people p choose to travel anoither country if they have enough time and money.some peop believe it is the besy way ti increase communication skills and proper behivor. in ,y opinion, this practice has great benefits this activity aims to promote a better understanding ,friendship and world peace among people from different countries.we will visit the graet wall and the foirbiden city, the thw great culture lefacies that visitors to hre must witness before they leave.on the moring of the first day, a two houe erforamce of peking opers has been booked up , flowed by a lecture by famous professor from the peking university.f

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