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recent decades have witnessed an apperant tedencty that more and more people p choose to travel anoither country if they have enough time and money.some peop believe it is the besy way ti increase communication skills and proper behivor. in ,y opinion, this practice has great benefits this activity aims to promote a better understanding ,friendship and world peace among people from different countries.we will visit the graet wall and the foirbiden city, the thw great culture lefacies that visitors to hre must witness before they leave.on the moring of the first day, a two houe erforamce of peking opers has been booked up , flowed by a lecture by famous professor from the peking university.f
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