2005年1月英语四级作文真题:学生会竞选演讲

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above all i am clever and delight person and i have the power to handle affairs .absolutely i am the right person u are lookingg for.another way of saying,to maintain a healthy and robust society ,everuone need me to do .as a matter of fate if i succsful to be an leader , i would have a good communicate with the students and listencareful their trouble and assist them to solve it.i have a better understanding of their psychology and personality ,i will give the students suitable guidance