2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

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the widespread use of this festival to exoress ourfelling to the teachers . there is a significant growth in p,s need all over the world. this essay aims to discuess the merits of celebratig the teacger,s day. on the one hand , our teacher is a science teacher .she is beautiful woman.she has long hair ,two big black eyes and a red ,outh. hei voice is bettershe is good at singing. she is clever . she like reading books and playing computer games and chess.she is also nice .she can active classroom atmosphere and when we meet difficult question sh often help us immediately.she also funny ,she can tell a joke and make us happy . today is her day ,i will brought a bunch of flowers for her and send my best wishes for her.