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with the rapid development of economy our student union will organazie a voluntary paogram to boost students practical ability . it will benefit the students and society to some extent.as far as i am concered,this activities aims to let all the students feel that happiness to attend the social service .it will inspire p to see the world and make the best of them selves .we will organazied students go the bj zoo to pick up rubbish and let them experience the society the workers hard work .sign up contract is over here