高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

last years the green trees around my home town ;the fish played in limpid river ,the home is briefness ,people is very friendly .nowdays , the highbuilding is everywhere in my home town ,green trees and fish are discrease ,my home town have many cars in the street small and big car gallop on the street