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As we all know,friends play a very important role in our life ,without them , our life will not be so wonderful. To be honest,There was a time whenＩwas not outgoing and had an inferiority complex about my terrible grades.My only response to the teacher's questions was blowing my head in class. However,things have changed since that summer. My good friends encouraged me to show myself bravely and built up my confidence.with the help of whom,Ｉ become more confident about myself and have a good command of knowledge because of my energetic behavior in class. Thanks to their enourage,from whichＩcan get encourage to overcome my weakness easily.
