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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As we all know,friends play a very important role in our life ,without them , our life will not be so wonderful. To be honest,There was a time whenＩwas not outgoing and had an inferiority complex about my bad grades.My only response to the teacher's questions was blowing my head in class. However,things have changed since that summer. My good friends encouraged me to show myself bravely and built up my confidence.with the help of whom,Ｉ become more confident about myself and have a good command of knowledge. Thanks to their encourage,from whichＩcan get encourage to overcome my weakness easily.
