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now the whole world has recocognized the the china is become a powerful country all over the world , which are considered as the mayor cause for many people came to here. consequently,more and more visitors adapt a positive way to come here . a beaytiful china convrs many aspect of modern life , i would inroduce u to come the summer place and yumingyuan which are world - famous .individuals can appricate the beauty and reflect the unique chinese culture.people are encouraged to go to see it .when u got there u could immersed in the happiness and holy atmosphere.u can using u camera to taking the photos .it is easy for u.all people should be couraged to got there.
