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Boys and girls, May I have your attention, Please? It's my honor to be here sharing my opinions about watching television. Recently, the number of students watching TV certainly is increasing a lot. To me, students are beneficial from watching TV. Indeed, it's easy for them getting information easily. Through watching TV, students definitely are able to know more about what happen in our world now, such as the news of US, HongKong, London and other words. Besides, watching TV helps students broaden their horizons and heighten their awareness of learning. Without a shadow of a doubt, the results of students who like watching TV is better than others. However, watching too much TV is result in having a poor eyesight. Thurs, it also will affect their academic results in the future. Thanks all for listening my sharing.