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2011年10月8日雅思写作真题:Population Ageing

发布时间:2013-07-25 16:08浏览次数:1628
要求:

【题目要求

The trend of the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Is it positive or negative to society?

【题目翻译】

在很多国家,老年人所占的比重正在逐渐上升。你认为这对于社会的好处大于坏处吗?

【关键词分析】

older people

“老年人”有很多说法,这个词在文章中肯定会多次出现,因此一定要做好同义替换准备。elderly people, the elderly,pensioners, senior citizens都可以,但要少用old people.

ageing society (Br.E.) / aging society (Am.E.)

老龄化社会,这个词是必备的社会学术语。这个词虽然没有在题目中出现,但是考生一定会在正文中用到这个词。

关于ageing society的相关知识,请阅读维基百科http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ageing

话题分类与题型

本题是老题,与2006211日的真题完全一致,与201036日的话题也基本相同。属于社会类话题的“人口结构与老龄化”分支。题型为议论文中的“利弊分析”。

话题评价

社会类话题今年考的频率异常偏少,上一次考社会类话题是在2011219日(妇女是否应当参军),因此这次话题完全在预料当中。本话题难度较小,考生应该不会感到无话可说。

类似话题

1.   Surveys show that in many countries,people are living longer but increased life expectancy has manyimplications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole.What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals andsociety? (100306)

2.   Some people believe that in order togive opportunities to the new generation, companies shouldencourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Doyou agree or disagree? (030712, 030809)

3.   In many countries today there isinsufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? Whatproblems might it bring to the society? (060708)

4.   The older generations have verytraditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking andbehaviour. However, some people think that these ideas are nothelpful for the young generation to prepare for modern life. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(080119)

5.   Some countries have anever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 andyounger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects itmay have in those countries? (080419)

【结构与思路】

利弊分析型的文章结构比较简单,一般只需罗列其好处坏处,结论段提出简单的解决方法即可。通常认为,老龄化社会的坏处可能要比它带来的好处更多,因此可以弱写好处段,重点放在负面影响上。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

句式变化多样;文中词汇表达使用较丰富,部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活,单词拼写方面要继续努力;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

nowadays it is common for see the trend of porportion of older people is increasing steadily.so there is a belief that huamn beings tend to into the aging socirty and i think this argument true to some extent. some people argue that most family members have work ,school ,or children to take care of and they don,t have enough time to devoite to their elderly even if they want to . other insist productive is primarly determined by the level of science and technology and labors are no longer the irreplaceable elements.and the g would pay lots of money to support the older people who lost the spouse or don,t have enogh money to support themselves. to summarise,in modern society ,i think that aging society is not bad thing as they can get more professional healthcare from the g.of course, family menbers should care about the olderly and it is everyone ,s duty to care of the elderly so that they won,t feel desetred

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