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2011年2月19日雅思大作文真题:Whether women can join the army?

发布时间:2013-07-24 16:43浏览次数:1278
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【题目要求

Some people believe that women should play anequal role as men in a country’s police force or military force,such as the army, while others think women are not suitable forthese kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give youropinion.

【题目翻译】

一些人认为妇女应该在国家的警察或军队中与扮演与男性平等的角色,而另外一些人则认为妇女不适合这些工作。讨论双方观点并且给出你的观点。

话题分类与题型

本题为新题,仍为“老题新出”,属于社会类话题中“男女平等”分支。题型为Argumentation。

话题评价

男女平等是雅思写作社会类话题中的一个重要分支之一,最近一次考查这个话题是在2011年1月15日,问的是工作中的男女平等。短短一个月内重复考类似话题的现象并不罕见,因此考生在复习写作话题的时候一定要全面,不要迷信预测。

男女平等话题也是口语考试的重点,在本次考试的口语考试中就直接有相关题目的考查,因此建议考生复习该话题的时候把写作和口语结合在一起复习。

这次考题与03年9月20日和04年1月10日的话题几乎完全一致,只是题型稍有不同,但写作方法完全一样。雅思写作其实已经早已没有新题了,现在几乎每次的考题都是从老题改写而来,只是改写幅度不同而已。 

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1.In many countries women are not able to join thearmy. But some people think women should be a member of the army, navy and airforce. Do you agree or disagree? (030920,040110)

2. Throughout history, male leaders always lead us toviolence and conflict. If a society isgoverned by female leaders it will be morepeaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagreewith this opinion?

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文章在学术词汇的使用上还要下功夫,拼写检查也需加强;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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the issue whether the woman shhould join the police or milartiry has raised hot debates .some sociolgists think that woman should be required to the army , wherease others hold that woman should not more freedom to joi the army.undeniably,there are points in both sides of the argument. there is no doubt that is it significant for the woman to participant in the army,initially,with the improving of living standard and society,woman plays an vital role in our life. it is fact that women been more and more attention to the society .a ordinary woman can generate sevel times as much as man during their working in addition,unlike the man ,woman would work more careful and achievements in scientific research fields . however ,it is too early to come to conclusion that as woman get vulnerable to some extent when they meet hardship.the lastes example was the woman ,s body qualification is not as good as man .thereforce , if meet ina group interview ,p tend to choose the man who don,t have face the give birh the baby in conclusion, it is a double edged sword . it is expected to continue woman join the army in the long term.but meanwhile we should make our egffort to let the woman treat equally.

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