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currently ,is some bigcities ,some product exist the excessive packing sometimes some product which poor quality but have a pretty paper or box to wrap it .and many people find it hard to open it because the plastic is too thick for open it.not to mentaion the oroduct is small but the box is big enough for hold it. the causes of it are varied.firstly,it can be ownes to p get more and more attention to the packing .it can embody the product have high quality and his owner have a good taste of beauty and social status .clearly, it is not a wise choice for pursue the hoigh living standard .in real life ,we have to adopt some effective measures.initially,as for the relenant producer,measures to reduce excessive packcgingand creat healthy manner of packing and advocate and popularise a kind of wholesome way of it.not only brings a merry mood to the consumers .finally ,every individual should also clearly know what they are want to buy instead of for the purpose of the packing aging to conclude, i suggest that all the products should reasonable packing
