小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new English teacher's name is Jullia.She is a beautiful and gentle young lady.She is about 22 years old.She is tall ,thin with long blond hair .She is very friendly to us students . She is popular with us all .She speaks English very well .Her classes are lively and interesting .So we love her classes very much .