2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):防止空气污染

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the ever increasing would population contributes to the climate change .due to p are pay more attention to the health ,the air population is the most threaten s for mankind,for one thing we should reduce the population gas from the factory.on the other hand ,we can plant more tress and flowers to make the air clean .moreover ,the excessive greenhouse gases would harm the human ,s health between the earth and atmosphere.with better economic condition, it is justified for people to spend more time and money to adopt an healthy and environmental way to deal with the problem and make the use of new energy. to conclude . we need to promote environmentally friendly lifestyle and object to