注意:
1.电子邮件的格式已为你写好。
2.词数:100词左右。
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,另外还需加强拼写检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I saw your notice in Internet just now. I know that you want a chinese friend who can help you konw about the culture and the language of china.Seeing this,I want to be your friend. Firstly,I will help you learn chinese.If you want to know china,you must learn chinese very well.Secondly,you should visit chinese beautiful city such as Beijing Sahnghai. Last but not least,I will help you to know about the festivel to konw chinese culture. I hope you letter.