小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend Today,I will tell you something about my best friend.Her name is Guo Yuhong.She is 12 years old and she is very outgoing.She likes surffing the Internet and reading.She is friendly to me,so she gets along with me.She has a good looking,and she sings very well.She always help me with my homework.As you can see,she is really good.And i hope we can be best friends forever!