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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(68):学生安全教育

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:49浏览次数:466
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The First Lesson of the New Term, a TV program about how to protect oneself in times of emergency, is meant to provide school students with the knowledge on self-protection. It will help students in case of natural disasters such as earthquakes, fires, snowstorms or floods. Many examples show that enough knowledge about self-protection along with enough courage and willpower can help many survive.
The most recent example is from the earthquake in Sichuan Province in May of 2008. While thousands of school kids were killed by collapsed school buildings, all students from a middle school survived even without a single one being hurt. That’s because of their timely and orderly evacuations (撤离), which they had been drilled in every term.
It’s good to see this program is the most important activity of a national campaign to make students be aware of personal safety. Chinese Education Ministry has called on all schools nationwide to give lessons on self-protection knowledge in times of emergency every term.
[写作内容]
某中学生英文报就“学生安全教育”为主题举行英语征文活动。你阅读了上述文章后,准备给该报投稿,稿件内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点,并包括以下要点:
(1)安全教育的重要性;
(2)举例说明中学生在日常安全方面应该注意的事项;
(3)呼吁中学生提高安全意识。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分41.0分
评语:

句式变化较为不错,另外需加强句子练习;作者词汇积累很好,不过单词拼写方面要继续努力;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

is is vital to educate students to obey the traffic rules.in our daily life , when the rtaffic lighs is green we could across the street and say goodbye to our parents.moreover,whe we left the classroom, we should mahe sure all the lights are turn off.bedides we should be save energy as mush as possible and use green energn for make a living.everuone can be better and better if she has a deam znd tries his best to realised it

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