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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17594
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Nowadays, majority of people sometimes have a situation of snap judgments. After they decided in haste, they were very repentantly. Well, they were also could be satisfied. In my opinion, I disagree with the snap judgments. On the one hand, I argue that most of people will decide to not right things because most of people don’t calm down to analyze conditions. For example, Napoleon had not analyzed circumstances at that time, and he had the general who did not obey Napoleon’s instructs. So Napoleon beat Battle of Waterloo. On the other hand, the snap judgments carry risks that will give people great pressure. Because people should be responsible for their decisions .And then, they will lose sleep or sick. Such as, melancholia and cancer. It is a significant reason that the snap judgments are not individual things, and deciding to the things is the duty of team. For instance, taobao is a team, in which employer and employees cooperate with each other, so taobao is succeed. In any case, the snap judgments on own is not your good ideas if you were a manager. I disagree with the snap judgments, the leaf has two sides. I consider that the disadvantage much more than advantage, but the advantage of snap judgments that it can grasp the opportunities. Firstly, if you have a chance of promote to a higher office, you should hold it as soon as possible. Secondly, you will be decisive when you encounter urgent situations. Above all, everyone should dealt with everything independently. As far as I am concerned, I believe that steady is a good quality of person instead of haste. As a student of university, we should improve our cautions. The snap judgments is not quality of person, but not excellent students’ personalty.

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