- 分享到:
若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
the classroom should be quiet and comfortable enough in order to study .some of p bring the moblie to the classroom so we may hearing soaring when we attend class .classrom should be students laern some knowledge ,s place .in case of this situation,s ought to turn off the mobile and don,t send the message on classs .s should pay more attention to their teacher and enhance the awaress of th eimportance of study.it is high time all the s should not waste the time to do anything alse or not related to their study.
