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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In my life, many times I was told about important of communication. when I was young, I couldn't reconginize that, and got hurt because of being not good at communication. People have different purpose, knowlege foundation, and religious issues, etc. always have varify understanding about one thing, so when we are working together, living together, communication is very ensential to get our goal. My indurstry of job is software enginnering, I deeply know software development is team work, it only can be accomplished by efficient team, efficient team depends on good communication. Not only software indurstry, other many activity is the same. Luckly, now we have many ways for communication, such as email, phone, msn.But the best manner always is face to face.

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