一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

MY BUSY DAY On Saturtay,I was busy .In the morning,I got up early and ate breakfast.Then I hurried to the park and say hello to sorry classmates."Sorry ,I am late."I said."You are welcome,pleace come there.It is going to start."We looked the football match. We had a picnic at noon. In the afternoon,I revised for my English and read books.I was tired at that time. In the evening,I went to a class for my Chinese.And went to bed at 11 o'clock. What was a busy day!