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I am very honor you can invite me to join your birthday party.But I am afraid I can not go to your birthday party. This weekend I have to help my parents with housework.My parents are busy in their work.And I am suppose to look after my sister.She is ill now.And I will visit my granny on Sunny. In a word,I am very sorry I can not come to your birthday party. Hvaing a good time.