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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Mary is an American girl. She has a round face. She has golden hair and blue eyes. She looks very beautiful. Mary is very good at English and always helps us practise English. She has a good sense of humour. She is generous and always willing to share things with us and makes us very happy. She is very interested in Chinese. But she can’t speak it well. We’ll try our best to help her with her Chinese. For example, We often talk with her in Chinese after class and teach her to say correct Chinese words.
