一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is Monday ,3rd August! in the morning ,i got up at 6:00! at the monment ,i had breakfast at 7:00!after ate breakfast,my good friend wanted me to play soccer with him,but i didn't want to do that ,i think it was boring ! well, i really want to play tennis ,because it is my favorite sport,i supposed it is so intresting! so ,in a while i play it with my brother! at noon ,i have to do my homework !Doing homework is good for us ,i like doing it !in the evening,i had my delicious food and watch TV!I also like doing it ,it can make me comfortable ！at 9:00,my father asked me to go to bed!so ,i have to do it ! This is my a busy day!