熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,many people are likely to draw a conclution immidiately when they see or hear something concerned with some situation,and as we all should that this reaction is not very sensitive because it can always arrouse many stricky problems. when someone makes decisions after hearing or seeing any relevent issue,he or she may make a big mistake ,for he or she doensn't really know the truth of the situation . The news which you heard can be mixed with others' own opinions or even can be faked by someone else. And what you saw may be also be as same as the former,which means the things you saw in a crack dont tend to show you the truth, so both actions mentioned above are able to mislead our minds and finally bring us to the misunderstand. in brief, before we decide to draw a conclution , we need to think it more than 3 times as well as know the truth , otherwise we will be likely to regret what we do today in the near future.
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