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Dear Tony, I am very happy about you can ask me for help.And I think you should make some new friends so that you can undersation how important about friendship and I accept that make friends must be patient and take some times.I have some advice about how to make new friends. First,you can conversation with others when you play in the community and introduce your new friends to your parents. Second,you can let your parents to take you to the library.You not only can make some new friends but also can learn lots of new knowledge. Finally,you should take a travel with your new friends so that you can know more about your new friends. In conclusion,you should take your time on your friends and conversation with them.You must be patient. I hope you can make a lot of new friends. Yours, Know.
