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Dear Tony, There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(What’s mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon! Yours,
