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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用学术词汇,文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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