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假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。
3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢，将它放在书桌上。
作者词汇量有些小，要注意检查拼写错误；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
But I am sorry that I cannot come to your birthday party.Because my mother is ill.The teacher told her to have a rest for a few days.So I have to look after her.Thanks for the post crad that you sent to me.I like it a lot.I want to put it on the desk. Yours, Han Mei
