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At present,homo sapiens is progressing at an amazing rate on various fronts.Likewise there is no doubt that education plays an increasing vitally important role in our lives.Yet at the same time,many problems have arisen ,a grave one of which is students more tend to be stressful .This issue has drawn widespread attention .In this essay,I will analyse some possible of this situation and propose some solutions. It is clear that the cause of intensity are multifarious .To begin with,it is undeniable that most students attach great importance to the examinations.Not only have they study hard at shool ,attend a vast number of activities as well,which means they tend to stress out after whole day ,moreover,without any physical activities.Consequently,the feeling of stress is sharply increase.Not surprisingly,students are under increasingly severe stress may suffer from mental or physical problems.Similarly,students who have to tackle intense peer pressure .Specifically,adolescence is a tough time for them.Teenagers are very sequacious ,what is worse,they cannot distinguish right from wrong.There is no denying that they would get trouble because of some trivial things or impulsive behavior.As a consequence,psychological burden will bring about pressure.Finally,household is another root cause of pressure .An illustration of this point is parents give their children more tutorial class such as Piano,dance and so on.As a result,the students get tired of studying.They do them utmost to skip class to hang out with friends .The reality is that they will easily get astray or even commit crimes. Accordingly,the solutions to this issue should also be varied.First,the school should take some effectively steps to alleviate students' stress .Encouraging students to develop some interests such as jogging,listenning to music.This kind of interests enable students feel relaxed.In terms of peer pressure ,shools are supposed to develop students' cooperation skills.They can learn it by playing a team sport.Lastly,when it comes to parents ,they should give their children more time to enjoy themselves. To sum up,several factors contribute to students feel stress.I would assert that we should take measures including school encourage them do develop some interests and cooperation skills,and parents should let them enjoy themselves to solve this disturbing problem.
