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新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达(1):聚会邀请信

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:55浏览次数:2670
要求:

假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。 


要点如下:
1、你很抱歉,不能去。
2、你母亲病了,医生叫她卧床休息几日,你要照顾她。

3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢,将它放在书桌上。


注意:
1.书信要通顺连贯
2.词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。

                                                   June18,2010  
Dear Mary,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your party.
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;可适当增加文中学术词汇的使用,注意文中个别拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Most people say that they find advertisements useful for giving them information about the products which are available on the market.But advertisements do not only give information, they also try to influence our emotions. The advertisers know that everyone tends to dream of having a better life.We dream of being better educated,more successful, wealthier, better looking, more adventurpus, and so on.The advertisers try to make us believe that our dreams will come true if we buy their products.This is why advertisements for home cleaning products often try to convince ladies that they can become perfect wives and mothers only if they use those products.And advertisements aimed at men often include the picture of a pretty girl.Such advertisements are suggesting that a man will be more attractive to women if he owns a certain type of car, or watch, or if he dresses in a certain style. The feelings that advertisements try to play on will differ according to the age groups for which the advertisements are intended.Advertisements for teenagers will emphasize that those products will make young people not only more attractive, more up to date, more socially successful, and more able to enjoy themselves, but also more successful in their education and job prospects. The problem with advertisements is that they tell us that money can make our dreams come true.But this is obviously not so.We cannot buy personal good looks, intelligence,good friendships or a happy family.A lot of advertisements are, therefore, a form of lying.They can also make peoplefeel depressed and discontented with their ordinary lives, especially those people who have only a small amount of money to spend on luxuries.

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