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假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。
3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢，将它放在书桌上。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
It was Saturday. Mr, Li was going to go fishing.He put a fishing pole on his shoulder. His dogs were running after him. But he forgot there was something wrong with his bike, and he hadn't mended it.He was so excited that he couldn't watch buses and ears carefully.Suddenly, a truck was coming and he didn't notice.He was hit by the truck and he threw away the pole. His bike was broken and a lump appeared on his forehead.
