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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦75:How to relax ourselves after the exam

发布时间:2014-10-31 17:22浏览次数:1452
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学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点:
1. 去旅游,亲近大自然;
2. 参加娱乐活动,比如:听音乐、看电影……;
3. 进行体育锻炼;
4. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数:80~100,不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。


How to relax ourselves after the exam
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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How to relax ourselves after the exam How to relax ourselves after the exam has been the most discussed among the teenagers.For me,I have two suggestions to relax ourselves after the exam better. On one hand,you can go on a journey with our parent.While watching special and pretty views and learning culture of different nations ,you do will broaden your minds as well as enrich your knowledge.on other hand,your should join a sport club.When the holiday is coming,many students may just eat or watch TV instead of doing some sports, and then they will gain weight and have serious healthy problems.So,if joining a sport club,you can not only keep healthy but also meet many friends.You can gain many interests by getting along with your friends. Having a good rest after the exam will help you face the next exam better.In brief,we should arrange our time and live a meaningful life rather than being lazy.I hope all of students can enjoy themselves after the exam.

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