作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;请作者增加词汇丰富度,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
there is no doubt that carrying out social activity can't without interpersonal communication .Now the internet plays an important role in interpersonal communication. different people have different opinions. some people guess the people can get better communication by the internet .trcending the regiond ,people can communicate freely with people they like .they can exchange their mind ,share their life ,which can decline distance of their heart.
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