2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

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First，you can get plenty of messages very fast。Second，if you use the Internet correctly，you will get a lot of help on studying。Third，you can make many kinds of friends。There are also some disadvantages。Playing computer games frequently and chatting online are wasting time and money。They are also not good for study。And maybe you will be cheated。 I think using computer is necessary，but learn how to use computers legitimately is also very important。I will make a plan of using computers,and use computers to learn much more knowledge.