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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
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熟练使用了一些长难句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As we all know that every coin has two different sides. Judging a person by their appearances has both adventage and disadvantage,but I think the disadvantage may far outweight the advantage. Sometimes we can acturally draw a conclution on a person by his appearance,but in most situation,it is not wise to use this method to judge a person.Because everyone has a unique face and the important thing is that the apperance is affected by his parents' gene,not his morality or behavours, if we just judge a person by his face ,it is unfair and we are likely to make a big mistake. In the reality, a lot of examples exist shows judge someone by the face is absurb.Many kind people may have not a good look , and someone can do bad things even if he has a goo face. All in all , it is dull to judge people only by appearances. So when we meet a person, we should put emphasis on something inside his heart,not his face.

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