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now the whole world has recognized the vital of the internet,which are considered as the major cause for the advande of science and technology.consequently,more and more individuals frequently used and make full use it. the internert covers many aspects of modern life .it can improve work efficiency and make it easier to study .such as ,u can turn to the internet for help when u meet a quention on u homwwork or acquire knowledge and experience from it.furthermore ,when udonmt know how to choose the object which seems to sililar it can help u make u decision through science analysis..it is useful tool to learn everything which is we donmt know know yet and subject to a correct answer. it has has also some problem.one big problem is that internet make the yong people at he school age addicted it so that they can,t live without it when u puch him aback in normal life.the disadvantages of internet is teenager can,t listen carefully in class . in conslusion,the advantages of the internet weight its disadvantages.it it plays an important role in our life. we have reason to believe that the internet in china has a bright future
