2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

nowdays it is common for yong people to express their own ideas about canteen on publicin in own school.so here is a belief that our school canteen is so bad that flies to go to there to lose weight.and i think this argument is true to some extent. there are numerous reasons why i support this opinion, and i would explore a few of the most important ones hee. to start with,the price is high and too poor quality to taste it . while the atmosphere is impressive . students should be encouraged to eat at school .thee fore ,p thend to eat outside the school .however , in real life , we can slao see some delicious food cooked by ouy schoo ,s chef.it is impossible for lots of p to eat at school in modern society woithout the incredible chef. in conclusion, i am convinced that the canteen is an irreversible trend . it is natural for p to eat delicious food at school. this phenomenon has become more apparent in the commmerical society