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Nowadays,with the development of the modern technology,our lives become more and more croy and convenience than what they were many years ago.In the other words,we are able to have a lot of different choices to pass our lives which means our lives can be eighter meaningful or meaningless by ourselves. In my opinion,I think we should try our best to make the lives spark,for the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.As people in the socity,especially students,really should not waste much time on playing games,sleeping too long,staying up too late and so on.Instead,we can cultivate some hobbies which we are interested to or try to do something to help others.I think these things t said above can improve our lives a lot,and if we can do these,we will live in a happy life,not an indolent life. All in all,it is not wise for us to waste our precious lives.Only a meaningful life can make a person's life significant.
